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-CCash is a web server hosting a ledger for Minecraft, able to be used from anything that can interact with its Restful API, including ComputerCraft. 
+CCash is an external ledger for in-game economies, running on a webserver with a RESTful API, exceptionally fast and lightweight written in C++17.
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+While CCash can be used for anything that can interact with its API I think minecraft is a good example:
 
 the currency model most Minecraft Servers adopt if any, is resource based, usually diamonds, this model is fraught with issues however:
 
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 CCash solves these issues and adds a level of abstraction, the main philosophy of CCash is to have fast core operations that other services build on
 
-the CCash instance can be external to the minecraft server 
+the CCash instance can be external to the game server 
 
 ![image](external_diagram.png)
 
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 ![image](localhost_diagram.png)
 
-running it local to the minecraft server reduces latency for ComputerCraft connected services, fortunately CCash is sufficiently lightweight as to not impact performance on most setups.
+running it local to the game server reduces latency for ComputerCraft connected services, fortunately CCash is sufficiently lightweight as to not impact performance on most setups.
 
 **DISCLAIMER: if you are to run it locally and want to use ComputerCraft with it, make sure to add `127.0.0.1` to ComputerCraft's config section `allowed_domains`**